ABOUT ME I am a girl of 22 years of age, my height 1.54 m, I have black straight hair, my eyes are dark brown, I am thin, weight 49 kg, he studied engineering in design, I was born under the sign of Sagittarius, I am a girl very happy, friendly and above all sincere, so I do not like lies, my hobbies are: listening to all kinds of music, watching movies, going to the disco to dance, go to parties, going out with someone on the streets and see the wonderful landscape.
INTERESTS
Finish my career, I like cooking, fashion, music, reading, watching movies, going to parties with my friends, and find someone who values me for who I am.
LOCATION
Loma Bonita, Oaxaca
Angela, I'll point out all of the parts that need changing but I won't make the changes for you.
ResponderEliminar1. I am a girl of 22 years of age
2. my height 1.54 m.
3. weight 49 kg
4. he studied engineering in design,
5. I am a girl very happy
(you need to make these agree with the other verbs "concordancia") go* to parties, going out with someone on the streets and see* the wonderful landscape.
(please write a complete sentence for this part) find someone who values me for who I am.
(In general, your sentences are too long. It's a good idea to break up the different ideas into separate sentences.)