ADELA NORIEGA
Adela Noriega, she is an excellent mexicana actress.She has a great career in telenovelas as: real love, María Isabel and others.
- She enjoy it when a man her gives elephants of plush and flowers, especially tulips.
- She like it when interpreted a character in a novel.
- She can´t stand it when the journalists ask her private life.
- She love it when her family this with she in her ranch.
- She don´t like finish a novel and start over other because it not wants people to get bored of his image, so two years rests and travel with his family to her ranch.
Angela, this is a good entry, finally! I'm so happy. But you are missing a reflection yet again.
ResponderEliminarIs real love the name of the soap opera? Then it should be typed with big R and big L. Actually, you should leave it in Spanish but write the name of it in italics (cursiva.)
I'll mark with a (*) the places that you should consider revising.
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She enjoy* it when a man her* gives (S-V-O -> object pronoun is after the verb) elephants of plush* (there is an easier way to say this, plush elephants) and flowers, especially tulips.
She like* it when interpreted (who interprets?) a character in a novel (novel or a soap opera?).
She can´t stand it when the journalists ask ABOUT her private life.
She love* it when her family this* (did you translate "esta"? Are you using a translation program???) with she in her ranch.
She don´t* like finish a novel and start over other because it* not* wants* people to get bored of his* image, so two years rests (change the order here-> she rests for two years) and travel* with his* family to her ranch.