Lisa Miller had always been a woman very punctual in his work, had a well-established schedule for the day. She awoke at 6 am to shower and eat breakfast, because he knew his bus went out at 7: 30 am therefore she always woke at 6 am.
But one day Lisa Miller called to his house to offer her a job which she had always wanted and which I agree go to job interview, however to be able to go the interview was to take place at 7:00 a.m. so she could go to another job, so put your alarm at 5 am.
But Lisa while asleep dreamed what he would do if he gave the job up to a point where he thought that his dream was reality, and when the interviewer told to stay with the job. But in the dream I hear the alarm woke up and realized that was the 6 am, and arrived late at the bus stop at 6:35 am, indicating that he had arrived five minutes late, and could not go to your interview.
Upon returning home, turned on the TV and saw on the news that she lost city had fallen into a ravine and that all passengers had died, so the impact far and at the same time felt a great relief.
Angela, how are you doing today? I like the cartoon picture you inserted for the entry.
ResponderEliminarI think this story has a lot of potential but right now it is a tangled mess of confusion. Let's see if we can clean it up a little, shall we?
Angela, I'll mark the parts that are unclear or that I can't understand with a *. I'll make a list of the sentences that you should change.
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Lisa Miller had always been a woman very punctual in his* work, had a well-established schedule for the day. She awoke at 6 am to shower and eat breakfast, because *he knew *his bus went out at 7: 30 am therefore she always woke at 6 am.
But one day Lisa Miller called to *his house to offer *her a job which she had always wanted and which *I agree go to job interview,
(Angela, at this point I have no idea what is happening in the story.) however to be able to go the interview was to take place at 7:00 a.m. so she could go to another job, so put your (MY ALARM!?!?) alarm at 5 am.
But Lisa while asleep dreamed what he (Lisa is a man?!) would do if he gave the job up to a point where he thought that his dream was reality, and when the interviewer told to stay with the job. (and then what happened?) But in the dream I (you heard?) hear the alarm woke up and realized that was the 6 am, and arrived late at the bus stop at 6:35 am, indicating that he had arrived five minutes late, and could not go to your (my interview?) interview.
Upon returning home, turned on the TV and saw on the news that she lost city (she lost city???) had fallen into a ravine and that all passengers had died, so the impact far (what?) and at the same time felt a great relief.
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Did you write this in English or did you write it in Spanish and then copy and paste it into a translation program?